I know i post this kinda late.
Ive seen how you play as this character, and its good, so keep it up.
Anyway:
Name - Awsome
Age - Great
Race - Great
World - Good
Class - Great
Decription - Good ( I like the eye thing, but it was a little short but its still good)
Personality - Good
Bio - Great
Weapons - Awsome
LV: Perfect (xDD)
Its a great character you made, and about the sword with random ability, I'd like to see/read a time when you use that one. Just to see if it fit n_n
Anyway, Keep it up!